As a writer who is fairly new to the startup world, I had a lot of catching up to do. Gateways, coding and platforms were things I never thought I would write about. Don’t get me wrong, but not every aspiring journalist expects to get her start in technology.
Now I can honestly say I really enjoy my experience writing for startups. I may not be a guru, but I can hold my own. That being said, after a month of self-education, and a little help from your websites, I have a request for entrepreneurs who do their own writing; before you post it, ask your mom if she understands it.
The words on your website are just as important as the coding used to create it. And if every other word is jargon only you understand, that’s going to be a problem. You can’t acquire customers if they can’t make it past the homepage. If your target audience only includes tech-savvy entrepreneurs with advanced knowledge of your product, knock yourself out. Otherwise, you’re going to have to rethink your strategy.
Tips for your web writing
Know your audience
Who is looking at your site? Is it someone who works for Google or is it the small business owner down the street? Are they familiar with services you provide, or will they have to learn about it? These are questions you are going to have to tackle before you write.
Use jargon only where necessary
If it isn’t necessary to use technical terms, don’t. People are often intimidated by what they don’t understand. If you need to, offer a brief description. It will go a long way, I promise.
Use simple sentences
The longer the sentence, the more likely it is that you will confuse your reader. Don’t use 28 words when 5 will do. You should be able to describe what your business or software does in less than 5 sentences.
Be consistent
Once you use certain words and phrases to describe what you do, keep it the same throughout the site. The chances of customers understanding your services are much better.
Q&As are your friend
Think about what questions customers will certainly ask, and provide the answers right away. This is the easiest way to clarify details or provide more advanced information for people who have advanced knowledge.
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Posted by Brad on July 12, 2010


3 Comments to "Your product is great, but I don’t understand it"
Comment by Jackson
July 12, 2010 at 3:41 pm
This is some great advice! Sometimes organizations get so caught up with the products or services they are providing they forget how to communicate effectively with their customers.
Comment by Luci McKean
July 12, 2010 at 2:30 pm
Very nicely written! As a professional writer, myself, I think you give great advice.
Comment by Brian Crescimanno
July 12, 2010 at 2:11 pm
Not to go on a rant here as I think the overall message is good, but I hate the “hypothetical mom test.” While I agree that you want your content to be accessible, using this “test” as any measure of accessibility of information again completely ignores the intended audience.
In a start-up, you need to build real relationships with your early adopters. They need to be the type of people you can put your content in front of for this type of evaluation (who better to represent your audience than someone who is currently paying you?)
As I said, I ultimately agree with your point, but it just seems so backward to then suggest that “your mom” is representative of your audience (except, of course, in cases where she is).